Dawn

Pale winter sun Frost covered grass waking, bright Expectations high.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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January 28, 2012 at 11:20 PM
I used to see plenty of that kind of scenery every morning when I walked to school. This is a very descriptive haiku.
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