Dawn

There is a lightening in the sky.

The night is now a memory.

A touch of morn I see on high

Dawn tiptoes in so quietly.

The day begins for you and me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Walters Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 6:15 PM
I love your meter here, lovely! I really like the image of dawn tiptoeing in quietly! best wishes, hugs, kris
Pettit Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 5:34 PM
There are similarities to this quintain and the last one I read. Both of them are of top quality.
Loving Iii Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 9:33 PM
you gotta see my latest> it's just like this one. John
Onclaud Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 9:20 AM
elegant, francine... so much imagery in few lines !! :) huggs, nette
Babcock Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 9:00 AM
I like the way you personify dawn tiptoes in. Enjoyed the read this morning. God Bless Phyl
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