Dawn

Eye blossoming dawn
Air rich with golden splendour
I sharpen my axe.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 5:01 AM
Get right to it! Great haiku!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 6:05 AM
I like this a lot. In the morning piercing sun could it be you’re getting ready to down a tree or a coffee… Enjoyed! xomo
Conn Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 1:55 AM
Morning intercourse - It's all in the swing of the hips. =]
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