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Dawn

Eye blossoming dawn Air rich with golden splendour I sharpen my axe.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 9/22/2023 5:01:00 AM
Get right to it! Great haiku!
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Date: 9/8/2023 6:05:00 AM
I like this a lot. In the morning piercing sun could it be you’re getting ready to down a tree or a coffee… Enjoyed! xomo
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Chris Conn
Date: 10/15/2023 1:55:00 AM
Morning intercourse - It's all in the swing of the hips. =]

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