Dawn

Dawn, like a curious child,
	peeks through my window.
She calls directions–
	“Be thankful! The air is filled
with pages of a cookbook!
	“Be still! Your mind waltzes
at a ballroom pace, your
	blood pumps fast as bad news.”

I stuff my ears with the wool of shorn
  desires–wiry fingers itch my ear drums.

The velvet door opens in a gust, the late
  winter air catches in my throat.

Dawn’s caress moors on my skin,
  like crows gossiping on the eaves 
of a landlord’s house.

Zephyrs of the collective unconscious
 tickle my throat & I manage to whisper

	“Blessed are those who rise each day &

		breathe.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rolland Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 12:25 AM
this is beautiful, i love the punchline too yann
Bryan Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 9:28 AM
Thank you so much! It took me a while to come up with the exact final line so I’m very glad you liked it
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