Dawn

morning renders solace, cloaked still in darkness, slowly the sun will make her way, rising to meet the call of day!

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Date: 2/16/2021 10:08:00 AM

A transition of night to day. Lovely write. ~~

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 3/10/2021 1:12:00 PM

Hi Victor, Thank you once again for stopping by to read my poems. I appreciate your encouraging comments. Have a Great Day! Paulette

Date: 2/4/2021 8:57:00 AM

Joyous moments such as you describe are priceless & imprint our emotional dna...nice work!

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/5/2021 1:32:00 PM

James, Thank you! Truly, watching the sun rise is a magical moment that carries me through the day.

Date: 1/30/2021 9:48:00 AM

Beautifully written, Paulette, early morning is my favorite time of day. I've seen many beautiful sunrises. John

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/31/2021 9:35:00 AM

John, Yes, the morning is so inspiring isn't it? So glad you enjoyed a beautiful sunrise with me.

Date: 1/27/2021 12:09:00 PM

good way to describe the start of a new day with relatively few words and accompanying adequate rhyming.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/30/2021 8:17:00 AM

Hi Robert, "Thank you" for your comment. For me it was a peaceful morning that could not go without notice. Have a glorious day!