Dawn

morning renders solace,
                                     cloaked still in darkness,
                                     slowly the sun will make
                                               her way,
                                    rising to meet the call
                                               of day!
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Buhagiar Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 10:08 AM
A transition of night to day. Lovely write. ~~
Calasibetta Avatar
March 10, 2021 at 1:12 PM
Hi Victor, Thank you once again for stopping by to read my poems. I appreciate your encouraging comments. Have a Great Day! Paulette
Goff Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 8:57 AM
Joyous moments such as you describe are priceless & imprint our emotional dna...nice work!
Calasibetta Avatar
February 5, 2021 at 1:32 PM
James, Thank you! Truly, watching the sun rise is a magical moment that carries me through the day.
Gondolf Avatar
January 30, 2021 at 9:48 AM
Beautifully written, Paulette, early morning is my favorite time of day. I've seen many beautiful sunrises. John
Calasibetta Avatar
January 31, 2021 at 9:35 AM
John, Yes, the morning is so inspiring isn't it? So glad you enjoyed a beautiful sunrise with me.
Pettit Avatar
January 27, 2021 at 12:09 PM
good way to describe the start of a new day with relatively few words and accompanying adequate rhyming.
Calasibetta Avatar
January 30, 2021 at 8:17 AM
Hi Robert, "Thank you" for your comment. For me it was a peaceful morning that could not go without notice. Have a glorious day!
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