David

Admiring crowds adore his looks;
He sure is easy on the eyes,
And stands so proud without his shorts,
But some refer – ahem - to size…

David by Michelangelo
For Heather’s Famous Art contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Haick Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 11:12 PM
Congratulations on your very fine win in the contest! I knew it was a winner. Always, Annalise
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 7:40 AM
Ha trust yoo Jack, congrats my friend.. xx I was looking at my family tree the other day, we have a Jack Horne in it did your ancestors come from Yorkshire?(could be John Horne when I think about it lol xx
A   Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 8:58 PM
Jack, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win in Heather's "Famous Art" poetry contest. *Goodnight~LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 4:52 PM
This one I would have scored higher just because it was so dang funny!!! hahaha Loved it. Congrats on your win, my friend.
Ober Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 1:50 PM
Jack, this is FANTASTIC! I will never ever look at this sculpture the same way again ;) Your humour never ceases to amuse me. Congratulations on your win in my contest!
O'Leary Avatar
February 5, 2013 at 2:45 PM
Very funny, Jack... ope things are going well... Terry
Horsman Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 5:07 AM
this is amazing jack,, need the laugh thanks...
Dietrich Avatar
January 30, 2013 at 11:08 PM
hahaha, I LOVE how you did this. You are so clever. I'd give it a top win!!! by the way, the lyrics I just wrote were for Franks' contest. Go listen to the song Hallelujia. (never can spell that word) on youtube and you will see how beautiful the melody is.
Wesley Avatar
January 29, 2013 at 6:03 PM
I had to read twice to get the gist of it but it finally sank in and I can't stop laughing. Great sense of humor you have! Love, Lizzie
Pettit Avatar
January 27, 2013 at 9:55 PM
There was a copy of the famous artwork at Caesars in Atlantic City. I don't know if it is still there now. I haven't been there in years.
Sweetheart Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 8:57 PM
an interesting view on this work of art Jack luv ..much luck in contest.. sure have missed u my friend ..on the road back to mend but oh so slow ..
Haick Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 8:06 PM
LOL! Another great entry which I'm sure is headed for the Winners' Circle, Jack! Brilliant. I'm still working on mine. Love, Annalise
Merryman Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 6:35 PM
Good job, Jack! I like the humorous aspect of it. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
Kendrick Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 4:44 PM
Reads like a winner..Great idea and presentation of the idea..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Sivey Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 3:30 PM
Ha ha, this great Jack, I love what you have done here my friend! I positively enjoyed reading this delightful poem this afternoon! What an especially funny piece, Awesome Work!!
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