Daughter's Perspective of Her Mother

Wrinkles caress her face.
A child emerges from within.
Smile straight from her heart.
Advice given from wisdom.

Enjoy your life when you are young.
Never just sit around doing nothing.
Someday you will be old like me.
Wanting to branch out, seeing the world.

I never went to far from home.
Never got to experience life.
I gave it up made some sacrifices.
Felt smothered with great remorse.

Had to work two jobs.
Never got to see the joy.
Took care of an ailing man.
Kids drove me crazy with wants.

Now I am alone and old.
I can barely walk.
But in these last few months,
I find even now, I can have fun.

A trip to the zoo with my grandson.
The first in over thirty years.
Antique mall shopping,
with my newest friend.

Now I can have luncheons out.
I have a favorite spot.
Now on my Senior discount.
It does not cost much at all.

I can sleep as long as I want.
Do not have to wake at a certain time.
I only have me to answer too.
No more do I have to live the grind.

So with all that I am, I do hope.
My children will see before it is too late.
Get out and experience what life has to offer.
Because someday you will be like me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/15/2011 4:28:00 AM
great advice my friend....I tell my hubby if we want to travel do it now because we will not be able in old age probably.
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Date: 4/14/2011 10:09:00 PM
A stench of familiarity in your piece. I love the story, but hate to see people waste even one moment. ~JSLambert
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Date: 4/14/2011 6:14:00 AM
Fun is doing what you want to do whether it's at home or out and about. Glad the lady in this poem has found her happiness...Enjoyed the write. Thank You
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Date: 4/14/2011 6:03:00 AM
I really liked this, very interesting write. Jeff
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