Daughter's First Halloween Bonfire

DAUGHTER’S    FIRST    HALLOWEEN    BONFIRE



Arm around her tiny back, ham fist
And nails that could scratch granite,
Fingers to crush metal bottle caps,
Chin-stubble sandpaper rubs  her face.
The  little girl he shoulders  to see the flames.



She shelters from the heat behind his neck,
Mesmerised but terrified by the flames, 
And  the stars obscured  rudely  by smoke,
And soot flakes like ragged black crows
Suddenly scared from a tree.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 28, 2010 at 4:59 PM
intense heat... enjoyed reading today!
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