Daughter

Phyllis comes today
Will not have time to play
Lunch will take my time
It could be a total grind

Oh the joy 
When she walks in
Gracing my day
With her stay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
October 5, 2009 at 2:38 PM
Great read SaraI try to return on my comments but sometimes my decease won't let me write I have a form of Muscular dystrophy called FA so if I can't write all the time I'll still be reading.Teresa
Brown Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 11:53 AM
Sara, Hope you had a wonderful day together. Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 11:12 AM
I bet you smile widely Sara, kool >>James
Richards Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 6:45 AM
Enjoy your daughter's visit....yes the joy !! ~ Carrie
Guzzi Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 6:05 AM
I wish my son would just walk in we're a continent apart. Light & Love
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 4:54 AM
Sara, This poem is a very sweet rhyme. And I hope that you will show it to Phyllis if you have not already. It is a wonderful tribute to her. Keep the words flowing! Very nice write here. Lovingly, Dane
Christian Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 4:44 AM
aww a great poem, have a lovley time, you could treat yourself to a takeaway maybee just as a one off give more chance to put your feet up relax get more time to chat, relax, play a game while you wait for delivery, mmmm food for thought LOL ,, thanks for your kind comments God bless you from diane
Higgins Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 4:15 AM
Very beautiful..you captured the expectation very well in this piece.
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