Daughter

Phyllis comes today Will not have time to play Lunch will take my time It could be a total grind Oh the joy When she walks in Gracing my day With her stay

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T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 10/5/2009 2:38:00 PM

Great read SaraI try to return on my comments but sometimes my decease won't let me write I have a form of Muscular dystrophy called FA so if I can't write all the time I'll still be reading.Teresa

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/12/2009 11:53:00 AM

Sara, Hope you had a wonderful day together. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 8/12/2009 11:12:00 AM

I bet you smile widely Sara, kool >>James

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/12/2009 6:45:00 AM

Enjoy your daughter's visit....yes the joy !! ~ Carrie

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/12/2009 6:05:00 AM

I wish my son would just walk in we're a continent apart. Light & Love

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 8/12/2009 4:54:00 AM

Sara, This poem is a very sweet rhyme. And I hope that you will show it to Phyllis if you have not already. It is a wonderful tribute to her. Keep the words flowing! Very nice write here. Lovingly, Dane

Diane Christian

Date: 8/12/2009 4:44:00 AM

aww a great poem, have a lovley time, you could treat yourself to a takeaway maybee just as a one off give more chance to put your feet up relax get more time to chat, relax, play a game while you wait for delivery, mmmm food for thought LOL ,, thanks for your kind comments God bless you from diane

Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/12/2009 4:15:00 AM

Very beautiful..you captured the expectation very well in this piece.