Dating Part 1

Dating Part 1

I waited too long for this day,
This appointment day to come,
For me and that enchanting lady to meet for the second time,
We set it on twelve o’clock, Corner Restaurant,
I was the first to arrive, waiting for her,
Special paid table of two with all things on it,
Waiting for a hot girl, scrolling my phone,
With full faith that she will come rainy or shine,
Like we spoke earlier in the morning over the phone,
Ten minutes past twelve, i pressed my cell-phone,
Her number was on voicemail,
One minutes later i reached her on the phone,
“ Hi baby, i am on the way. Five minutes please...”
Ten minutes later she is not yet arrived,
Fifteen minutes later my phone rung,
It was her to tell me that she is sorry she can’t make it,
And she asked for another date..
Damn i was disappointed and discouraged,
I put my head on the full paid table with eyes getting wet,
I heard messaging on my shoulders,
I raised up my head and try to look who is messaging,
This beautiful lady i don’t know,
“My partner did not show up on date, i am burdened. Aren’t you?”
She said and continued to give me a message on my shoulders,
I felt my body quickly rebuilding back it strength”
“Can we share a table, lover-boy?”
I did not say much as she was on the way to the chair,
She sat and looked on my eyes , and i looked on heirs and smile softly.
.....................................Curtain.............................................

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/19/2015 12:45:00 AM
Dating Part II is in transit and will arrive soon......
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Date: 11/19/2015 12:43:00 AM
Dating Part II is in transitand will arrive soon...
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Date: 4/18/2015 10:05:00 AM
oozing feeling... nice poem dear :) inviting u to read my Pyramid :) ---Elai (good to b back after 1 year)
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Mulaudzi Ndifelani Eric
Date: 4/19/2015 7:35:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 4/14/2015 9:47:00 AM
GOOD ONE! Waiting for Part 2...to see what happens! Thanks
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Date: 4/14/2015 10:06:00 AM
Thanks. Part 2 coming soon.....
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