Len Gasun Poet Tritina

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Date With the Chaperon of Moonlight

You illuminate our hearts as you brightly smile
A splendid feeling for us lovers in the night
We’re completely snuggled  under your light.

Sitting beside each other at the park with your light
We look at one another lovingly with sincerest smile
Then, our tender kisses filled the cold air of the night.

It turns out to be a very lovely and romantic night
Our most passionate love under your gleaming light
Our love is ablaze in the chaperon of your smile.


Your smile in the night is our best amorous light.



Feb. 25, 2013
Form of Poem: Tritina
©2014by Leonora Galinta



9th Place
Contest: Introducing Tritina ( a new poetry form for you)
Judged: 3/9/13
Poet Sponsor: Poet Andrea Dietrich

2nd Place
Contest: Moon and Sea
Judged: 3/13/13
Poet Sponsor: Poet Linda/PD

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Skat A April 17, 2013 at 9:16 PM Light and I love it Leonora. Thank you for stopping by my poem, It has been an honor reading your poem tonight. LUV ~*~SKAT

Audrey Haick March 16, 2013 at 5:48 PM Sorry, I'm late Leonora, but congratulations on a very fine win! Beautiful poem! Love, Annalise

Donna Jones March 14, 2013 at 6:52 PM This is gorgeous Leonora ..congratulations...Donna

Poet Destroyer A March 10, 2013 at 9:37 PM HI SWEET LEO, this happens to be a xool and exciting new form in which Andrea, introduced for her contest. ~ CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome Tritina winning poem. Take Care, LINDA

Joseph May March 10, 2013 at 12:31 PM congratulations on a fine win Leonora

Bukang Liwayway March 10, 2013 at 10:15 AM Congratulations dear friend Leonora on your awesome win in Andrea's Contest. Have a nice day. God bless!! hugs from me, Maria

David Williams March 10, 2013 at 7:42 AM Leonora congrats on your win, very romantic, I like...David

Kash Poet March 10, 2013 at 7:12 AM Love this romantic poem Leonora!Congrats on the win.

Andrea Dietrich March 10, 2013 at 12:21 AM ahhh, this romantic one is yours, Leonora!! As I am reading them all again now I am wishing I'd put some of them even higher on the list!! Congrats. I am glad you tried a tritina.

Connie Gildersleeve March 4, 2013 at 7:19 AM Congrats on your win. Connie

Tahera Mannan March 3, 2013 at 10:05 PM Many many congrats for this wonderful win Leonora

Andrea Dietrich March 3, 2013 at 3:54 PM hey, I didn't want to see who wrote the tritinas for me before judging, but I can see that yours will be on my list as well. If I ever get around to judging it. haha. Congrats on it winning with PD!

Olusegun Arowolo March 3, 2013 at 3:47 PM Wonderful!Superb write,dear friend..Congrats on your well deserved win...XOXO...

David Williams March 3, 2013 at 2:57 PM Leonora congrats on your win....David

Skat A March 3, 2013 at 11:54 AM Congrats, with your nice lovely win-Skat

Poet Destroyer A March 3, 2013 at 9:48 AM Good morning my dearest poet sis... Leonora, thank you for the nice and beautiful poem, many blessings with your wonderful win~happy happy ~ PD

Poet Destroyer A March 2, 2013 at 10:14 AM yeah,,,, I'm hosting a moon or sea contest... hope this is for my contest... Goodnight sweet sis...xox~PD

Tim Ryerson February 28, 2013 at 4:45 PM Have mercy on an old man Leonora! (I have a heart condition you know)...Very passionate and beautiful write my friend! - Tim

Sara Kendrick February 28, 2013 at 3:31 PM I especially like the last line of this one..If written for the contest, reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon.Thanks for stopping by..Your honoring me in two thoughts with the visit and placing in the favs.Great to have the moon as a chaperon.Sara

John Loving Iii February 28, 2013 at 3:20 PM chaperon? what a forgoten concept.

Bukang Liwayway February 28, 2013 at 8:57 AM So romantic, so creative poem of yours my dear Leonora...wish this will put in action soon hehehehe...Love all your poems. mwuah!!! Hugs, Maria

Anne-Lise Andresen February 25, 2013 at 11:53 AM Leonora, it's so lovely and sweet ..... it's really romantic!! <3 <3 <3 - Today you gave me a smile on my lips. :) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey February 25, 2013 at 11:37 AM Wow, this is such a beautiful and romantic write my friend! I enjoyed reading this amazing poem this afternoon! What a dynamic piece you have written here, Great Work!!