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Date with a Carbohydrate

Carbohydrate, pleased to meet you. How happily I greet you. Pull up a chair, let me seat you. And now, I will eat you.

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Date: 6/25/2025 8:20:00 PM
Ha, ha, ha, ha. Very clever... Though with me, the carbohydrate winds up 'sticking around.' ~ Waist Land
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David Crandall
Date: 6/26/2025 10:02:00 AM
haha, yup, i've got some banana oat squares in the oven now. My limit is to eat <= 4 squares. Let's see how I do.
Date: 6/24/2025 12:49:00 PM
Your "Date with a Carbohydrate" is a fun read and creative write. Hope you are OK... Have a fun/blessed day writing away...............
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David Crandall
Date: 6/24/2025 9:03:00 PM
Thanks, Paula, yup, I'm OK, does it seem like I"m losing my mind? - lol
Date: 6/24/2025 12:33:00 PM
haha. LOVE it
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David Crandall
Date: 6/24/2025 9:02:00 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Date: 6/24/2025 11:28:00 AM
Sounds about right! Sounds about a gazillion calories ;)
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David Crandall
Date: 6/24/2025 9:02:00 PM
haha, yup!
Date: 6/24/2025 10:40:00 AM
good one David:-) hugs Jan xx
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David Crandall
Date: 6/24/2025 9:02:00 PM
Thanks Jan!

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