Date with a Carbohydrate

Carbohydrate, pleased to meet you.
How happily I greet you.
Pull up a chair, let me seat you.
And now, I will eat you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Wolf Avatar
June 25, 2025 at 8:20 PM
Ha, ha, ha, ha. Very clever... Though with me, the carbohydrate winds up 'sticking around.' ~ Waist Land
Crandall Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 10:02 AM
haha, yup, i've got some banana oat squares in the oven now. My limit is to eat <= 4 squares. Let's see how I do.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 24, 2025 at 12:49 PM
Your "Date with a Carbohydrate" is a fun read and creative write. Hope you are OK... Have a fun/blessed day writing away...............
Crandall Avatar
June 24, 2025 at 9:03 PM
Thanks, Paula, yup, I'm OK, does it seem like I"m losing my mind? - lol
Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2025 at 12:33 PM
haha. LOVE it
Crandall Avatar
June 24, 2025 at 9:02 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 24, 2025 at 11:28 AM
Sounds about right! Sounds about a gazillion calories ;)
Crandall Avatar
June 24, 2025 at 9:02 PM
haha, yup!
Allison Avatar
June 24, 2025 at 10:40 AM
good one David:-) hugs Jan xx
Crandall Avatar
June 24, 2025 at 9:02 PM
Thanks Jan!
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