Date Night

Long lean limber. sultry, slender,
Pretty pout, neat nails, great grin.
Fatal flaw?
Incredibly clumsy, elbow bumpy,
Tripped twice, shiner. Shucks, chagrin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Horne Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 10:37 AM
My apologies for missing so many contest results - many congrats on all your wins : )
Onclaud Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 11:44 PM
splendid scene, soul sistah..funny!...loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs
Kendrick Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 7:41 PM
Cute..Congrats..Sara
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 6:40 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!------Lori
Freeman Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 1:47 PM
Nancy, Thanks for the honor of reading your poem "Date Night" , I was honored by your worthy poetry. Congratulations on your fourth place. Agape, Moses
Merryman Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 12:40 PM
I can relate to the last two lines - lol! Congrats on your win, Nancy! Kim
Brown Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 8:42 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Moses' "Alliteration Poem Please" contest Nancy. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 4:10 AM
Nancy congrats on your win,,David
Sweetheart Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 1:22 AM
Congrats Nancy on sweet success with this great Alliteration poetry luv...
Ramsdale Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 12:36 AM
A 4th place congratulations Nancy for your placement in John Freeman's Alliteration Poems Please contest. CR
Merryman Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 9:39 AM
Cute! Kim
Poet Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 6:55 AM
Nice Alliteration here Nancy...best wishes.
Song Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 2:06 AM
DING DING DING...most likely a winner!! FUNNNY! Love it...slap stick. Have a great weekend, Gwendolen
Smith Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 1:30 AM
Sometimes it's the flaw gives the charm.
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