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Date Night

Long lean limber. sultry, slender, Pretty pout, neat nails, great grin. Fatal flaw? Incredibly clumsy, elbow bumpy, Tripped twice, shiner. Shucks, chagrin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/13/2011 10:37:00 AM
My apologies for missing so many contest results - many congrats on all your wins : )
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Date: 9/12/2011 11:44:00 PM
splendid scene, soul sistah..funny!...loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs
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Date: 9/12/2011 7:41:00 PM
Cute..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/12/2011 6:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!------Lori
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Date: 9/12/2011 1:47:00 PM
Nancy, Thanks for the honor of reading your poem "Date Night" , I was honored by your worthy poetry. Congratulations on your fourth place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/12/2011 12:40:00 PM
I can relate to the last two lines - lol! Congrats on your win, Nancy! Kim
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Date: 9/12/2011 8:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Moses' "Alliteration Poem Please" contest Nancy. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/12/2011 4:10:00 AM
Nancy congrats on your win,,David
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Date: 9/12/2011 1:22:00 AM
Congrats Nancy on sweet success with this great Alliteration poetry luv...
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Date: 9/12/2011 12:36:00 AM
A 4th place congratulations Nancy for your placement in John Freeman's Alliteration Poems Please contest. CR
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Date: 9/9/2011 9:39:00 AM
Cute! Kim
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Date: 9/9/2011 6:55:00 AM
Nice Alliteration here Nancy...best wishes.
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Date: 9/9/2011 2:06:00 AM
DING DING DING...most likely a winner!! FUNNNY! Love it...slap stick. Have a great weekend, Gwendolen
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Date: 9/9/2011 1:30:00 AM
Sometimes it's the flaw gives the charm.
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