Notes About The Poem

For 1481 Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand 

Date Night

pic show
no show?

she's late
first date 

lame gaffe
big laugh

airborne
popcorn
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Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 12:28 PM
Way to go, David. I tried to comment to this yesterday! Keep on footling away. I think my next will be clerihew. I submitted a regular short poem from June this time. Not holding my breath!
Crandall Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 8:51 PM
Thanks, Andrea! ;-))
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 5:02 PM
witty footle
Crandall Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 7:42 PM
Thanks, Sara!
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