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Date at Chipotle

Under harsh bright lights the Aluminum table tops gleam In lieu of good conversation He has allowed designer stubble Bought a new green cap at Abercrombie In lieu of good conversation She wears a low cut dress Presses breasts to the table Carries a faux smile Fascinated by The grilled chicken pieces on their plates They study them closely, Deeply. Milind Padki

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 4/6/2011 7:49:00 AM
I stopped by to read some more of your poetry today Miland. I enjoyed reading it and will be back again another time to read more. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/3/2011 11:41:00 AM
When I run out of words like great, good, wonderful all I have left is fantastic...and that's what this poetry thank you...Judy
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Date: 4/2/2011 9:24:00 PM
when i made my comment, i didn't know you were knew to soup, so i now say welcome to soup, sorry for over looking that, just keep posting.
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Date: 4/2/2011 8:24:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on P.S. will be fun and filled with sharing with luv.. our contests are free to enter.. so please check them out and good luck luv..
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Date: 4/2/2011 7:25:00 PM
a great creative piece of poetry.
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Date: 4/2/2011 6:00:00 PM
Interesting..Things are important..People are used..They have got it mixed up..Sara
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