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Dashed Dreams

Gone
Is some
Hope that’s far
Where our dreams are
They have been dashed, hurt
Wanting not to be burnt
So warm within great lighting 
I fancy the top-most living
Reasonable height of love within
Part of me divides when I don’t give in

Russell Sivey

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Jack Horne

February 17, 2012 at 2:40 PM

sad but excellent write, russell

Elizabeth Wesley

February 17, 2012 at 2:16 PM

Kind of a sad one Rusty, feel some pain but hope it is just a poem and not personal. Love the last line, very strong!

Nette Onclaud

February 17, 2012 at 11:23 AM

soup mail! ;)

Nette Onclaud

February 17, 2012 at 11:23 AM

giving and receiving are life;s lost precious gifts, russel.. wow, a real awesome write that touches me so!..:) huggs!

Sara Kendrick

February 17, 2012 at 5:28 AM

Yes, sometimes dreams disappear..Sometimes it is slowly over time and then again some are instantly gone or so it seems..Don't quit dreaming though for God opens windows when doors are closed..Enjoyed reading your creative work..May your poetic gift expand and overflow onto the pages of soup..Thanks for stopping by...By the way, I 'll never be a ballerina.Sara