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Written in the summer of 2014 most beautiful dream 

To take you in these arms right now 
flower you rise regal sunflower 
Sparkling petals over a princess
Whispering silently and softly 
I am your pilgrim 
who would do battle
for your sweet loving hand

Fluttering in deep tongues of light
Waving lashes turning over inside the brain
Totally smitten in your shining jewels 
silver dazzling in a milky smile 
Shimmers in your deep delicious beauty love
Always will be forever with me 
inside you my dream

Lady of light you shine a promise made 
sparkling crowns a vision rose
The moon is my banner there and back 
Standing on the edge with you
when sunsets dance their brilliance 
This is were I make my peek 
my total love open 
I have to you 

At those words 
falling I am at you're feet
Worshiping the very ground 
on which you stand out  
Queen of hearts 
who captured this soul beautiful


This I co wrote with someone whom I spent time with writing just to say it has taken to now to post for me this was a very special piece took months to write from a heart 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/13/2014 7:05:00 PM
Just dazzling! Another very beautiful romantic love poem my dearest friend Liam.Very sweet and tender one to be held very close to ones heart.I truly enjoyed it! Your pen is golden! A solid 7 +++for you! May you always feel the embrace and love of God and all His angels protecting you and giving you their guidance and radiant light and strength everyday.keep you faith hopes and dreams alive and forever. :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Date: 12/6/2014 9:02:00 AM
Your romantic writes stand with the best of them my friend. "Fluttering in deep tongues of light Waving lashes turning over inside the brain" Such inspiration, should I read this fantastic poem to my wife she will promptly insist I step up my game and write her one of the same caliber! A feat I am sure is near impossible ! Super 7 my friend, deserves a solid 10!
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Date: 12/6/2014 7:44:00 AM
A wonderful collaboration my friend..Tim
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Date: 12/6/2014 12:59:00 AM
Beautiful and romantic, Liam! And I just read it's a collab...it flows like it was written by one...so lovely from the heart. Have a great weekend! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/5/2014 9:06:00 PM
"I am your pilgrim"...Jumped out of the page, the entire poem spoke of such devotion, one can only wish the lovers the best. Cheers to you, Liam. A 7 for me too! Kim Patrice :)
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Date: 12/5/2014 3:07:00 PM
- Beautiful and romantic dear friend Liam - I wish you a beautiful weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/5/2014 2:36:00 PM
it is so romantic and beautifully penned with lovely imagery Liam - congrats to you and your co writer - excellent write
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Date: 12/5/2014 8:00:00 PM
jan dear pal thank you kindly truly very beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you