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Darling, It's Not What You Think

she put her finger to my lips as if she crossed any excuse out, as if this trivial phrase every man says were the last words of human on the Earth 30.08.2019 Silence Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One

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Georgia Kereopa

Date: 9/5/2019 4:07:00 PM

Kurt, loved the drama in this poem. Hanging here thinking, then what happened next? Nice. Congratulations on your win.

Silent One

Date: 9/5/2019 3:23:00 PM

Congrats on your placement in the contest..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2019 6:16:00 PM

I love this kind of succinct and most interesting poetry. I could really picture her doing this to him!

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 8/30/2019 7:04:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I'm happy you're reading me)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/30/2019 4:07:00 PM

I know I can always expect something unique and unusual from your poetry Kurt. This is no exception. An exemplary addition to your body of work! : ) xxoo

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 8/30/2019 4:39:00 PM

Oh, thank very much for your beautiful words, dear Connie. Rays of love)