CayCay Godwin Poet Tritina

Darling Child

Andrea Dietrich’s Tritina Contest



May your life hold memories as treasures compiled.
I hope each day favors your smile with cause to show.
Remember, though grown, you remain my darling child.

Light will reconcile any darkness for you, dear child.
At times, troubles will rumble until firmly compiled.
Solutions as seeds will grow until they fully show.

Life is not a looped 'happy ending' show.
Be brave, strengthen faith and embrace joy, child.
A good life depends on beliefs compiled.

When beliefs are faith compiled, joy will show, sweet child.

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Gershon Wolf September 22, 2026 at 8:12 PM This has that 'motherly touch,' but light as a feather! (No nagging allowed!) :) gw

Joseph P. DiMino September 22, 2026 at 9:30 AM "At times, troubles will rumble until firmly compiled. Solutions as seeds will grow until they fully show." -- Wonderful writing! A blessed child to have a mother so wise and loving.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 22, 2026 at 12:58 AM - What a lovely poem, CayCay :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Sing about autumn :))) - hugs CayCay Godwin September 22, 2026 at 1:52 AM I did, for at least an hour rousing my pep's collective curiosity. Even my cat looked at me sideways. (probably because I can't sing in tune.) I'm so glad you visited me. Think of you a lot. CayCay

Tom Cunningham September 22, 2026 at 12:06 AM You're right CayCay even as grown ups they'll always be your children. Lovely tribute. Good luck in the contest. Tom 🌹 CayCay Godwin September 22, 2026 at 1:53 AM Hi, Tom, thank you for visiting, it's always a joy! CayCay (thanks for the rose)