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Darkroom A room stayed in negativeness, provides to be disordered upon faint illumination. Some metallic clink drives the chaos, sums rousing fluid facing turmoil. Submerged paper being toyed about, mixed soon waved next drafts to dangle. A specific calming promptly hereafter, fate charge ahead proving one's aims. A final snapshot garners a smile, a peacock flees, as liquids settle, droplets dissolve, disarray relieved, a room darkens. 2020 July 02

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Date: 7/2/2020 6:45:00 AM
You gave voice to the darkroom, William--I see the transformation in your words --the process that brings photos to life.
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Date: 7/2/2020 10:06:00 AM
I am glad for your enlightenment, Vijay -- Aloha~@William
Date: 7/2/2020 5:38:00 AM
beautiful poem .......really pleasure to read
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Date: 7/2/2020 10:09:00 AM
My many thanks indeed, Mahtab -- Aloha~@William

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