Darkness Will Betray You

Dancing in the dark,
                               Winking at the moons slick grin,
                                   Feasting with your flesh,

                                 Asleep in motions madness,
                                 Paralyzed in cheap appeals,
                                Empty pleasures fade to dust,
                                    Frozen from its chill.


      By: Sabina Nicole
      Contest:Senryu:Dodoitsu
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 12:22 PM
Congratulations on your super win in Russell's "A Mesh Of Forms" contest Sabina. Love, Carol
Nicole Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 9:33 AM
:)
A   Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 10:15 AM
Sabina, congratulations with your win;-) Always~ PD
Nicole Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 9:33 AM
:)
Johnson Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 7:09 PM
A great poem and win Sabina. Love, Joyce
Nicole Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 9:33 AM
:)
Sweetheart Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 8:53 AM
congrats Sabina on a brilliant win for this wonderful mesh of forms luv..
Nicole Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 9:33 AM
:)
Dietrich Avatar
March 14, 2012 at 7:44 PM
wow, Sabina, this is really good stuff. I predict a GREAT win. at least it would win with ME.
Nicole Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 6:15 PM
Wow, thank you, that means alot to me!!!
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