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Darkness Nearby

There are things he won’t tell me as his wife like how he’s worried death is near and he’s letting us down He wants to be strong and grab the control but feels weak as time slips through his fingers And he hasn’t the strength to scream while keeping his eye on that dark tunnel here nearby he's worried but doesn't let on AP: 2nd place 2020, Front Page Pick 2020 Posted on September 18, 2018

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Date: 9/19/2018 1:02:00 AM
Well written, frightening! That dark tunnel scares me. I try to live never to travel down it.
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Date: 9/19/2018 6:04:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Timothy.

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