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Darkness Looms

When will the fog lift off the bay When will the sun scorch it away Mind dank in darkness Black hole so black falling falling ever deeper a veil looms where joy once existed. Oh for this weighty fog be lifted.

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/15/2019 12:21:00 PM

Foggy, cloudy cold wet weather can work on ones nerves, and mood if it continues for a long period of time, enjoyed this poem - well done Allen. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 4/15/2019 12:43:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 4/15/2019 2:58:00 AM

Amen my brother!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/14/2019 5:43:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work today. Depression can be a bad fellow and here lately so much fog, clouds and rain or snow it brings a body down. You described it very well. Sara

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 4/14/2019 5:46:00 PM

THANK YOU SARA