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Contance's 'Write a Beautiful Carpe Diem Contest'

February 15, 2026

Darkness Loomed in Mourning's Hour

Recovering from a bridge that's been burned depends on who lit the match that started the fire." ~ by poet I stood alone, watching as our bridge was burning His words were flames growing higher and higher Ashes fell as if they were dust from dying stars I was completely lost and disenchanted mesmerized by the fire's golden glow Darkness loomed over me in mourning's hour as dawn was slowly waking beyond the hills I was seized with the chill of being in pain Thinking never again would I trust in love Why should I when it ended like this? Years spent together would belong to the past and memories dim like the last breath of twilight but come unbidden when I'd least expect them Unwanted intrusions in reveries and dreams of scars and wounds scorched across my heart Each breath I took became a struggle One I wasn't sure I could continue taking I wondered if this sorrow would ever end and if there was no tomorrow, would I care since the bridge between us no longer existed
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Rodgers Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 8:53 AM
Dear Lin, You let sorrow speak without dramatics, which makes the grief land even more truthfully. A powerful, beautifully rendered piece. Blessings, Dear Lin, Daniel
Lane Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 11:56 AM
Daniel, you always read my intentions when I haven't made them clear. I appreciate you for that.
M  Avatar
February 21, 2026 at 9:36 PM
Another lovely Lin Lane powerful and touching write. Full of emotion and sadness…..beautiful. I hope you are well my friend. I haven't been around much and l thought you had moved on. Glad you are here ….not the same without you! Debx
Lane Avatar
February 23, 2026 at 10:43 AM
Hello, Deb. You've been missed unless I'm the one who's missed you since I'm rarely here these days. Thank you for your faithful comments. Hugs, sweet friend.
Kitchin Avatar
February 21, 2026 at 4:42 AM
Lin, a beautifully penned emotive poem. I can feel your heartache and sorrow. Some bridges are meant to be forever burnt and should never be rebuilt.
Lane Avatar
February 21, 2026 at 3:19 PM
Thanks ever so much for your compliments, Tania.
Empress Avatar
February 18, 2026 at 3:51 AM
Ofcourse a fave it is. !!! ;D your poem is worthy of faves and more
Empress Avatar
February 18, 2026 at 3:48 AM
" dust from dying stars" ah that line truly touched my soul, you are so fluent in writing heartache and more and in expressing emotions in ways a soul that feels so deep would know how to. I felt every word woven here and the flow of your exquisite lines! I especially love "Each breath I took became a struggle One I wasn't sure I could continue taking" ah linnersz, how poignant is this! I hope you are doing well. Its always a pleasure reading your evocative poems! Sending you light my friend
Lane Avatar
February 21, 2026 at 3:18 PM
You know I'm pleased to see you and appreciate your kind thoughts… always.
Parker Avatar
February 15, 2026 at 4:15 PM
I really like this poem; it took me back years ago when I wrote this line in one of my poems,"we crossed the bridge to our hearts, two sparrows caught in a storm" good luck in the contest
Lane Avatar
February 15, 2026 at 4:27 PM
Thank you, Frederic. You’ve always been supportive of my poetry and I appreciate you very much.
Cunningham Avatar
February 15, 2026 at 1:09 PM
Once bridges are burnt there is no going back ,all that's left is the dying embers. Well composed Lin, good luck in the contest. Tom
Lane Avatar
February 15, 2026 at 1:21 PM
Thanks so very much for always supporting my poetry, Tom.
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