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Darkness In the Light

As the night falls, I look out of my apartment’s window I come down and walk on the road Of this dreaded but beautiful place Thinking about you again and again Like light you were more than watts Never diminishing. Though it fills most of the places My heart is empty that you used to fill I hold back the tears and memories No longer this bridge is empty My tears have formed a lake I see a ghostly reflection in it Of who I once used to be. I fall softly off the bridge Drowning in my pool of sorrows.
+++ October 5, 2014 Form Free Verse Dr. Ram Mehta Second Place Win Contest: Find the puzzle by nette onclaud TARNDAI
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Yvonne Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 2:34 PM
Congratulations on your radiant win.
Mcintosh Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 9:24 PM
Congratulations on this so sad poem. It's wonderful. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
Richards Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 7:58 PM
You were able to tell a whole story, in just a few lines! Well done, Dr. Ram...congratulations to you!
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 6:22 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem Dr. Mehta.
Mohn Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 6:21 PM
Nicely written Dr Ram...congrats
Allison Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 4:14 PM
dropping back with my congrats Dr Mehta:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 3:30 PM
Sad, but beautifully written, Dr. Ram. Congratulations on your win in this contest. Sandra
Mcdaid Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 7:18 AM
deep touching beautifully penned piece ram keep the light shining dear friend
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 2:15 PM
So hauntingly sad but so beautifully written Dr. Ram! I wish you the best in this contest. love and light! xxx D.
Andresen Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 12:04 PM
- Heartbreaking .... beautiful / sad written, Dr. Ram ! - Luck in contest - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 11:56 AM
beautifully penned but so deep and sad. Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Thajudeen Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 10:38 AM
Light is very bright.
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