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Darkness Descends

a sanguine sun sinks - as night's ebony curtain of darkness descends
shadows coalesce - shapeless silhouettes conjoin - color atrophies

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Funom Makama

January 10, 2020 at 11:26 AM

Delicious lines, your imagery and creativity are royal sisters. Nice reading from the pen of your mind. Happy 2020.

Emile Pinet

June 20, 2020 at 7:23 PM

Thanks so much Funom, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier

January 8, 2020 at 7:08 PM

Lovely imagery Emile. Congrats on your top win.

Emile Pinet

January 9, 2020 at 8:11 AM

Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.

Paul Callus

January 5, 2020 at 8:38 AM

You describe the arrival of darkness with a most able pen, Emile. Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul

Emile Pinet

January 5, 2020 at 9:55 AM

Thanks so much Paul, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Eve Roper

January 4, 2020 at 9:58 PM

Congratulations on your in Silent One's contest. Hugs Eve

Emile Pinet

January 5, 2020 at 9:54 AM

Thanks Eve, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Juliet Ligon

January 4, 2020 at 9:00 PM

Well written. I'd never thought of it that way before. Congrats!

Emile Pinet

January 5, 2020 at 9:54 AM

Thanks Juliet, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong

January 4, 2020 at 6:49 PM

This is stunning Emile! Congratulations on your deserving First place! xxoo

Emile Pinet

January 5, 2020 at 9:53 AM

Thanks Connie, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

January 4, 2020 at 5:43 PM

wow, that is stunning, Emile, and did i tell you I finally got your book? It's is amazing. I just love it. Thanks so much for including me as your poetry friend inside it.

Emile Pinet

January 5, 2020 at 9:52 AM

Thanks Andrea, I love your comment and I'm so pleased that you like my book my friend, Emile.