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Darkness and Light

A dark soul long immersed in a grey world Awakened to a spirit’s shining beam And foolishly presumed as he uncurled His destiny was to possess her gleam. The dark youth’s folly then was slowly dimmed By reason, sweat, philosophy and years. Where once his hopes of lightness brimmed, In time’s passage, they all but disappeared. When once more fate flashed her bright rarity, It was not for him to have, but to see.

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Date: 4/23/2024 3:36:00 PM
I felt for the dark soul. Despite his folly dimming over time, his hope disappeared. How sad...the last two lines grabbed my heart. I appreciate the subtly of your words with their brevity and message. I don't do 'flowery' poems. Have a great evening, Sara
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David Crandall
Date: 4/23/2024 6:51:00 PM
Thanks Sara! Have a good evening!

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