Darkness and Hope

My world is closing in.
Darkness is surronding me.
I see no light,
I'm blinded and can not see.
My eyes are slowly shutting,
My windows begin to close.
I take two steps back,
and look at my withered rose.
Time is coming to a stop,
and my soul begins to die.
I learn to trust no one,
and only learn to cry.
All my life is ruined,
and now you truely see.
You took my heart and 
you ripped it in three.
My world is now,
only in black and white.
I have grown completly still,
and blocked out all the light.
Though I may be gone,
and have no words to say.
I know one thing for sure my Lord will return,
one truley happy day!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 17, 2010 at 4:16 PM
Wonderfully written Kirsten >> James
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May 12, 2010 at 6:30 AM
Nice write Love... express yourself with words.. you do it so well
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