Darkness

why have i been appointed with such an omen It feels as if i am writing my own reqiuem Everything i do feels like a mistake my prescence is not a present my life is no worth living for Could this be the end for me Weather forecasting is not hard for me Because every day is a sunless dark day My eyes are windows to this dark earth And my mind is the frame My heart is the glass now my heartis on the floor all shattered and broken

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/4/2024 1:13:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/7/2016 10:20:00 AM

SEIF, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/12/2016 2:45:00 PM

Hi Seif Hajri, Enjoyed reading your poem, Forever --- SKAT

Justcallme Britt

Date: 2/2/2013 1:56:00 PM

Wow... I can understand you sensitivity to the way the world is today. The way the world is today is a dark place so everything you do naturally good is wrong in that aspect. "My mind is the frame My heart is the glass": well put. Take the best care you can, Seif <3