Eve Roper Poet Rhyme

Darkness

The dark enchanted with death,
in utter silence, its stealth
fervor searching vainly deep,
drawing breath, soon all will sleep.


3/25/2019
Poetry Contest:  Four Lines - 
Sponsored by: Dear Heart

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Constance La France March 29, 2019 at 10:48 AM Eve, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned piece ~

Caren Krutsinger March 28, 2019 at 1:57 AM Back to say CONGRATULATIONS on top win!

Anisha Dutta March 27, 2019 at 11:02 PM SO true. BIG CONGRATS to win top.

Jennifer Proxenos March 27, 2019 at 3:49 PM Congratulations Eve, this was certainly a well deserved win - a deep dark poem about eternal sleep. Poetry hugs, Jenny.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2019 at 2:21 PM - Congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Marc March 27, 2019 at 9:39 AM I love it :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy March 27, 2019 at 1:49 AM Congratulations, Eve on your win. The eternal sleep so well depicted.

Demetrios Trifiatis March 26, 2019 at 11:44 AM It is the lot of humans so well expressed dear, Eve! Good luck my friend!

Arthur Vaso March 25, 2019 at 10:28 PM I can sure feel this one! :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 25, 2019 at 4:30 PM oh that's good. appealing to my goth sensibilities ;) love it. a winner for me! good luck in the contest! xomo

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. March 25, 2019 at 8:08 AM Well done. We all shall sleep. But those who have accepted Jesus, who died for our sins, will rise again and live FOREVER. (John 3:16) God bless

Caren Krutsinger March 25, 2019 at 4:28 AM Eve, my poetess friend, a lovely missive in four tiny lines. Well done!

Tom Cunningham March 25, 2019 at 3:13 AM All fears and worries seem to surface in the dark. Good write Eve. Good luck in the contest. Tom.

Mahtab Bangalee March 25, 2019 at 1:33 AM impressive writings

Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2019 at 1:26 AM - ... very dark, Eve - Well done - Best wishes in the contest - Have a lovely new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)