Darkness

The dark enchanted with death, in utter silence, its stealth fervor searching vainly deep, drawing breath, soon all will sleep. 3/25/2019 Poetry Contest: Four Lines - Sponsored by: Dear Heart

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Constance La France

Date: 3/29/2019 10:48:00 AM

Eve, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned piece ~

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/28/2019 1:57:00 AM

Back to say CONGRATULATIONS on top win!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/27/2019 11:02:00 PM

SO true. BIG CONGRATS to win top.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/27/2019 3:49:00 PM

Congratulations Eve, this was certainly a well deserved win - a deep dark poem about eternal sleep. Poetry hugs, Jenny.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/27/2019 2:21:00 PM

- Congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

P.M. Richter

Date: 3/27/2019 9:39:00 AM

I love it :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 3/27/2019 1:49:00 AM

Congratulations, Eve on your win. The eternal sleep so well depicted.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/26/2019 11:44:00 AM

It is the lot of humans so well expressed dear, Eve! Good luck my friend!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/25/2019 10:28:00 PM

I can sure feel this one! :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/25/2019 4:30:00 PM

oh that's good. appealing to my goth sensibilities ;) love it. a winner for me! good luck in the contest! xomo

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 3/25/2019 8:08:00 AM

Well done. We all shall sleep. But those who have accepted Jesus, who died for our sins, will rise again and live FOREVER. (John 3:16) God bless

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/25/2019 4:28:00 AM

Eve, my poetess friend, a lovely missive in four tiny lines. Well done!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/25/2019 3:13:00 AM

All fears and worries seem to surface in the dark. Good write Eve. Good luck in the contest. Tom.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 3/25/2019 1:33:00 AM

impressive writings

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/25/2019 1:26:00 AM

- ... very dark, Eve - Well done - Best wishes in the contest - Have a lovely new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)