Darkling In Distress

"Darkling in Distress" Spirits of ancient entities prowl hauntingly through eerie mist encumbered by flesh no more beyond sweet breath of lovers kiss as skeletons of eras past evaporated vapors wandering through tunnels concealed by lace drapes of sorrow. in clandestine atmosphere horror of hollow empty shells dark corridors impune as essence of torturous bones consume an imprisoned heart of a darkling in distress. kidnapped in a vacant enclosure of constrained emotions sequestered in quicksand down in a dark dungeon of a Life broken a crushed pedestal a crumpled effigy spewing volcanic ash from a verbotin sham sad spirit departs to wanderlust of withered dust parched and perished by pain black memories scream ... scream ... down in the dark dungeon thoughts tantalize: Life is only a vapor, a mist and Death is the beginning of Life. *darkling - an entity in pain *verbotin - forbidden *For Nathan's Insanity of Death Contest ..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Babcock Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 10:43 AM
Words from heaven we miss you. love phyl
A  Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 2:05 AM
you will always be amazing...SKAT
Sweetheart Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 7:56 AM
WON 5th place ... thankxxx..
Grisetti Avatar
August 10, 2012 at 7:52 AM
Congratulations, Linda-Marie, on a well deserved win.
Brown Avatar
August 10, 2012 at 6:56 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nathan's "Insanity Or Death" contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
May Avatar
August 10, 2012 at 5:57 AM
congrats on your win Linda
Williams Avatar
August 10, 2012 at 2:49 AM
Linda-Marie congrats on your win, very good write...David
A   Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 8:21 PM
Linda,,, my bfff.... , a big congratulations in Nate's contest... his winners always seem to amaze.. i know how picky he is.... glad to see you here...pd
Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 8:16 PM
wow, LInda, here is one of yours I missed. YOu set an excellent "dark" tone in it. Love how you used that word Darkling. Big congrats and I sure hope you are doing ok lately??
D. Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 8:07 PM
congrats. Nate'
Brown Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 6:07 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Dungeon"contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 3:12 AM
Linda-Marie congrats on your win, love it..David
Crisci Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 10:02 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie's contest, " Down In The Dar Dungeon ". I believe you deserved a higher rating on this excellent poem. I have enjoyed reading it...and even though it's a dark poem, it exudes mystery and suspense. Thanks for your comment this morning. I am doing well and I hope you are too. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs, Andrew.
Sweetheart Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 7:52 AM
WON 8th place ... thankxxx ...
Horne Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 12:52 PM
love this wonderfully dark piece, my friend - sure to be a big winner. I see you've got another contest - I must put my thinking cap on, lol
May Avatar
July 14, 2012 at 7:06 PM
nice write Linda....love Joseph
Brown Avatar
July 14, 2012 at 11:27 AM
The best to you in Debbie's contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
Nair Avatar
July 14, 2012 at 9:23 AM
Great write, friend, best to you! Jag
D. Avatar
July 14, 2012 at 12:51 AM
cool poem love the darkness good luck in contest
Falotico Avatar
July 13, 2012 at 6:03 PM
Your work is always escalating to new heights of beautiful poetry. Love to be reading my Jersey Girl this Friday night. Love n long hugs and a kiss on the cheek to you. Michael
Sivey Avatar
July 13, 2012 at 5:04 PM
This is a fabulous interpretation Linda-Marie! I thoroughly enjoyed this incredible dark write! You sure kept me engrossed into your poem all throughout! Awesome write my friend! Great Work!!
Sweetheart Avatar
July 13, 2012 at 4:47 PM
my version and interpretation of contest theme .. enjoy poets with luv.. thankxx for all well wishes too.. happy weekend ..luv..
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace