Darkening Sun

Deifying themselves,
  the scientists disprove
  with their tools
  the existence of God

To sit on a throne
  artificially made
  the Creator to them
  falsely shod

They loudly decry
  as their courtiers boast
  about how powerful
  their laws have become

While built into their structure
  a flaw starts to crack
  their self-glory
  —a darkening sun

(Villanova Pennsylvania: April, 2019)
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April 14, 2019 at 9:25 PM
The pride of man trying to deify himself..that age old, timeless sin! Well written poem, Kurt. Excellent metaphor of the darkening sun, too. Enjoyed. :)
Behm Avatar
April 14, 2019 at 10:13 PM
Thanks Laura
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