Darkening Stream

The stream grows dirtier
as it flows down
towards the ocean.

In a boat
as I drift with the tide-
the water darkens
more and more.

Yet I glide
on this winding stream
to the infinite ocean.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 1:24 PM
Really like this. You have great flow!
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