Darkening Skies

Darkening Skies				
Thunder
Claps her hands
Bidding me 
Listen to her song

I am the bass
Resounding far and wide
I am the  drum
Tapping life’s rhythms
I am the strings
Rising and dissolving in unison

Silence enters
I strain to hear a refrain
But the song has faded
What was is no more

Self disappears
With a prescient falling 
Dropping, dropping
When

A faint echo whispers
Let go of the past
Surrender to the present
Breathe its nectar deeply
Follow its rhythms
Trust in abundance


Last version??? Oct 28 2011
August 7
After bike ride with Nancy

KDK

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/5/2016 3:15:00 PM
I like this. 'Breathing the nectar of surrender' and 'following its rhythms. Nice one.
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Date: 9/5/2016 7:57:00 PM
Thanks! Appreciate your specific comments. Hope you'll visit again. Kathy
Date: 3/20/2016 9:11:00 AM
Thanks! You have many beauties--gives one much to think about. Especially liked Scarred Land.
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Date: 3/19/2016 4:45:00 PM
Oh, yes... I like the line, I am the bass... the imagery rolls off like thunder and ends with self catering. I do like this one. A perfect 7. Kathleen, you are an amazing free verse poet... if you ever write a poem or have a poem about the stars let me know..... Linda
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