Dark Wonderland

Falling down the rabbit hole,
tumbling, twisting, uncontrolled.
Regret filled voices fill the void,
each one calling out my name.
Caught in fractured dreams,
reflections of my true self haunt me.
Blood red shards fill the air,
no love remains here.
Bitter pieces of a broken mind,
seeking out my personal truth.
Step through the shattered mirror with me,
and see this unreality.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 11:46 AM
I am just starting to read today and I must say there are some exceptional poems posted. Glad yours was included in my reading today Amy. Love, Carol
Wilson Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 5:15 PM
sounds like something tough to face..good piece..take care~Deb
Joseph Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 4:10 PM
sounds like the moment you have to face yourself, what a beautiful poem.
Slaughter Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 3:37 PM
Wow! This was certainly a deep poem, giving great insight into the soul! Thanks for sharing!
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