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Dark Wonderland

Falling down the rabbit hole, tumbling, twisting, uncontrolled. Regret filled voices fill the void, each one calling out my name. Caught in fractured dreams, reflections of my true self haunt me. Blood red shards fill the air, no love remains here. Bitter pieces of a broken mind, seeking out my personal truth. Step through the shattered mirror with me, and see this unreality.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/28/2010 11:46:00 AM
I am just starting to read today and I must say there are some exceptional poems posted. Glad yours was included in my reading today Amy. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2010 5:15:00 PM
sounds like something tough to face..good piece..take care~Deb
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Date: 10/27/2010 4:10:00 PM
sounds like the moment you have to face yourself, what a beautiful poem.
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Date: 10/27/2010 3:37:00 PM
Wow! This was certainly a deep poem, giving great insight into the soul! Thanks for sharing!
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