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Dark Thoughts

darkened moon
filthy room

five fast bullets
locked and loaded

perilous inches
from my head

fate is held
by my true loves' hand

deathdepressionintrospectionlifelovefree verse

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Michael Jordan

April 4, 2009 at 9:17 PM

Janetta - a very thought provoking write - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ

Shahana Jackson

April 4, 2009 at 6:58 PM

Your true lovers hands holds that gun that hold your faith lol I loved it good write

Phyllis Babcock

April 4, 2009 at 6:51 PM

Congrats on your poem being featured this week. God Bless Phyl

Brandee Augustus

April 4, 2009 at 2:32 PM

Haunting and brilliant all at once. Well deserved feature.

Laura Mckenzie

April 2, 2009 at 8:40 PM

Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

Ernilando Tugaff

April 2, 2009 at 2:45 PM

Hello Jannetta, congratulations my friend for having been featured this week. You are not the one who was in that plight, right? Just asking. Friend, Ernilando

Sue Mason

April 2, 2009 at 12:31 PM

Ooooh hope this wasn't "for real" for you !! I've been in that "filthy room" and I'm so grateful I never have to live like that again and won't have a gun anywhere in my life ... smile ... you really got to me with this one, Janetta ... good time to get grateful ... smile ... congratulations on this real life write being a feature this week!!