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Dark Thoughts

darkened moon filthy room five fast bullets locked and loaded perilous inches from my head fate is held by my true loves' hand

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Michael Jordan

Date: 4/4/2009 9:17:00 PM

Janetta - a very thought provoking write - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ

Shahana Jackson

Date: 4/4/2009 6:58:00 PM

Your true lovers hands holds that gun that hold your faith lol I loved it good write

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/4/2009 6:51:00 PM

Congrats on your poem being featured this week. God Bless Phyl

Brandee Augustus

Date: 4/4/2009 2:32:00 PM

Haunting and brilliant all at once. Well deserved feature.

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 4/2/2009 8:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 4/2/2009 2:45:00 PM

Hello Jannetta, congratulations my friend for having been featured this week. You are not the one who was in that plight, right? Just asking. Friend, Ernilando

Sue Mason

Date: 4/2/2009 12:31:00 PM

Ooooh hope this wasn't "for real" for you !! I've been in that "filthy room" and I'm so grateful I never have to live like that again and won't have a gun anywhere in my life ... smile ... you really got to me with this one, Janetta ... good time to get grateful ... smile ... congratulations on this real life write being a feature this week!!

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 4/1/2009 8:17:00 AM

Bad situation. Congratulations Janetta on "Dark Thoughts" being featured. Vince

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/30/2009 10:49:00 PM

This is a sad and frightening write, but very well written. Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/30/2009 5:27:00 PM

This is one powerful write. Congrats on an awesome featured poem! Love, Shar

Date: 3/30/2009 3:20:00 PM

A quater-finalist and now a featured poem. Congratulations! Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen