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February 8, 2026

"In Dark Silent Night" Poetry Contest

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Dark Silent Night

Snow falling uninterrupted, unhindered in the silent, dark night, 
Shimmering snow pellets floating down like thin silvery clouds, 
Some adorn the unruffled evergreens - glimmering gems on a tiara, 
Some reach the hard ground and melt like our unfulfilled emotions do, 
Sky with no blinking stars, somber in reverie like a meditating saint. 

I close my eyes, my mind filled with reflections of the past, 
Delightful, exultant, tranquil ….
Dismal, dejected, gloomy, 
All crowd crystallized in my memories, 
My childhood, adolescence, youth, all unfold in my mind in a moment of tranquility, 
Gone through many rare experiences which have made my life richer, 
As I behold at the absolute darkness of the night, 
And experience the sacred feelings of watching snow fall, 
My solitary heart prays, devotes, dedicates, bows, glows, 
My mind gets purified with an intense desire to be out in the universe, 
And feel the inspiring oneness under a mysterious canopy. 

Dark night 
Silent night.. 
With the absence of all sounds, and all sights, 
I connect to my god.
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 9:36 PM
wow, I can identify with these two lines: My mind gets purified with an intense desire to be out in the universe, And feel the inspiring oneness under a mysterious canopy. When I sleep at night I do travel out into the universe...it's a beautiful experience.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 6:55 AM
Dear Sara, truly appreciate your soulful comment on my poem. I have this mysterious experience sometime - just like you - when I feel the oneness with the universe, although I am alone.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
February 11, 2026 at 2:36 PM
captivating, poem, Mala...such soulful and deep words hugs, Sara
Ray Choudhury Avatar
February 11, 2026 at 3:32 PM
Dear Sara, so delighted to find your comment. Your inspiring comment inspires me to continue writing. Thank you so much.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 8, 2026 at 12:16 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Dark Silent Night" write. What a great ending you have here. "I connect to my god."  "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed day/week writing away...............
Ray Choudhury Avatar
February 11, 2026 at 3:30 PM
Thank you, Paula. Your beautiful words inspire me to write.
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