Dark Sea

Brash  the dark-sea sounds
stars steer the gleaming wave's blades
the impending clash

animaldarklonelinessnaturesolitudesenryu

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Eve Roper

November 25, 2016 at 8:33 PM

this is so lovely, Robert when we were younger we use to camp by the ocean and it is so fascinating to be around the cool breeze, the crash of the waves, the moon light sparkling shadows over the surface, the scent of the air w-o-n-d-e-r-f-u-l. A poem inspired :) Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

October 27, 2016 at 8:07 PM

Cool rhyming between beginning and end, Robert. It could be a new form of KU!

Paloma P

October 27, 2016 at 3:08 AM

Succinct, yet effective Robert.

Paloma P

October 27, 2016 at 4:50 AM

Ass-prints in the sand, I just noticed that! :) You should definitely write it...

Robert Warlov

October 27, 2016 at 3:29 AM

Succinct because it's a Haiku, but fails to adhere to the other "rules", like the mindset that governs their purpose: the elucidation of natures concomitants with the oriental mythos.

White Wolf

October 26, 2016 at 11:35 PM

Hahaha, I just read your comment below. But love this haiku! You are a funny man Robert! Thanks for the laugh mate

Robert Warlov

October 26, 2016 at 11:50 PM

Thanks Rick. The depression was long ago. I love Haiku, but the form is so exacting- so brief to illuminate, inspire, or convey wisdom. I think it brings us closer to the truth within ourselves. The poem writes itself.

Robert Warlov

October 26, 2016 at 10:33 PM

When people see me, they know they don't love me, so, depressed, I go to the beach at night. -- Question: Did any poet ever write about ass-prints in the sand?

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