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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Dark Rain Blackened Earth

dark rain blackened earth
before the greening emerged
and blossoms burst forth

© Jan 16, 2011
Dane Smith-Johnsen

Copyright © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen | Year Posted 2011

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February 6, 2011 at 4:05 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

January 24, 2011 at 6:21 AM

Hi Dane Ann - Congratulations on your WIN in the "Dark Rain" contest. Best wishes, KC

January 18, 2011 at 7:42 PM

congradulations on your win. T. S.

Andrea Dietrich

January 17, 2011 at 7:30 PM

I love the contrst and how it all worked together in the end. One other winner here I saw did the same type of comparison. Congratualtions, Dane Ann. LUv, Andrea

January 17, 2011 at 2:25 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Dane

January 17, 2011 at 1:16 PM

I'm picturing an explosion of bloom Dane Ann from your fine poetry. Many congratulations on your win....:)

January 17, 2011 at 11:16 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest, Dane Ann. Always, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 17, 2011 at 5:59 AM

Congrats Dane Ann on your wonderful win in the Dark Rain contest with this vibrant entry my friend.. enjoy sweet success with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 17, 2011 at 5:46 AM

Congratulations for your win in the "Dark Rain" contest Dane Ann, sponsored by S K A T*. Love, Carol

January 17, 2011 at 4:48 AM

Dane Ann you used some brilliant imagery in your haiku.. Congratulations on your win in Irma's contest ;) WN

Michael J. Falotico

January 17, 2011 at 4:05 AM

Congrats on your success on your win , well done....always Michael

January 16, 2011 at 9:34 PM

Congratulations, Dane Ann !thank you so much for your Haiku. I had fun reading every dark rain entry~luv~SKAT

January 16, 2011 at 1:23 PM

Interesting use of imagery and alliteration to share your thoughts. Keep on writing!! Karen

January 16, 2011 at 7:34 AM

Good one..Longiing for that first blossom..Sara

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