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Dark Rain Blackened Earth

dark rain blackened earth before the greening emerged and blossoms burst forth © Jan 16, 2011 Dane Smith-Johnsen

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/6/2011 4:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/24/2011 6:21:00 AM

Hi Dane Ann - Congratulations on your WIN in the "Dark Rain" contest. Best wishes, KC

The Situation

Date: 1/18/2011 7:42:00 PM

congradulations on your win. T. S.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2011 7:30:00 PM

I love the contrst and how it all worked together in the end. One other winner here I saw did the same type of comparison. Congratualtions, Dane Ann. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/17/2011 2:25:00 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Dane

James Fraser

Date: 1/17/2011 1:16:00 PM

I'm picturing an explosion of bloom Dane Ann from your fine poetry. Many congratulations on your win....:)

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/17/2011 11:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest, Dane Ann. Always, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/17/2011 5:59:00 AM

Congrats Dane Ann on your wonderful win in the Dark Rain contest with this vibrant entry my friend.. enjoy sweet success with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/17/2011 5:46:00 AM

Congratulations for your win in the "Dark Rain" contest Dane Ann, sponsored by S K A T*. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/17/2011 4:48:00 AM

Dane Ann you used some brilliant imagery in your haiku.. Congratulations on your win in Irma's contest ;) WN

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/17/2011 4:05:00 AM

Congrats on your success on your win , well done....always Michael

Skat A

Date: 1/16/2011 9:34:00 PM

Congratulations, Dane Ann !thank you so much for your Haiku. I had fun reading every dark rain entry~luv~SKAT

Date: 1/16/2011 1:23:00 PM

Interesting use of imagery and alliteration to share your thoughts. Keep on writing!! Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/16/2011 7:34:00 AM

Good one..Longiing for that first blossom..Sara