Dark Rain

Disturbing droplets
Spiral out of my control…
Devilish desires



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Sponsor S K A T * 
Contest Name Dark Rain (haiku)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 16, 2011 at 1:28 PM
Good use of alliteration to make your point. Best wishes in the contest. Keep on writing!!!! Karen
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January 15, 2011 at 2:02 AM
i sense a gnawing passion here, cecil.. and i like it! just smashing! lots of winning luck in the contest! :) huggs, nette
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January 14, 2011 at 10:58 PM
good luck in the contest,..p.d.
Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 8:41 PM
wow, I really like this!!
Parker Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 7:46 PM
Sadistically sardonic! Somebody has a sick sense! Just kidding!
Pettit Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 7:42 PM
This looks like a good haiku for the contest.
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