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Dark Rain

Disturbing droplets Spiral out of my control… Devilish desires Written for Sponsor S K A T * Contest Name Dark Rain (haiku)

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Date: 1/16/2011 1:28:00 PM
Good use of alliteration to make your point. Best wishes in the contest. Keep on writing!!!! Karen
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Date: 1/15/2011 2:02:00 AM
i sense a gnawing passion here, cecil.. and i like it! just smashing! lots of winning luck in the contest! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 1/14/2011 10:58:00 PM
good luck in the contest,..p.d.
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Date: 1/14/2011 8:41:00 PM
wow, I really like this!!
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Date: 1/14/2011 7:46:00 PM
Sadistically sardonic! Somebody has a sick sense! Just kidding!
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Date: 1/14/2011 7:42:00 PM
This looks like a good haiku for the contest.
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