dark of night

It was a warm balmy night very peaceful
the woods slept soundly the moon shone 
In the quiet stepped out a unicorn flowing
silver mane it paused sniffing the air warily

Satisfied it started to cavort around gayly
soon a stag joined in and a fairy both dancing
They called to friends to join in all stepping high
Dancing and cavorting they continued  till dawn.

They then went their separate ways only hoof
marks showed they were ever there people 
puzzled over marks and shook their heads
Yet on the next moon lit night they returned.

And for many nights they cavorted with glee
Waiting for something to appear still waiting
then a star beamed down and prettily she
came touching noses with her mate then

They vanished back into the undergrowth
leaving all wondering if they ever or not
had been there at all.

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Date: 4/18/2024 6:56:00 AM
Dear Shadow, your poem cleverly evokes a sense of wonder and enchantment, as if peeking into a realm where magic reigns supreme. I loved that in the tranquility of the night, you created a scene of mystical beings frolicking under the moon's gentle gaze. Yet beneath the surface lies a subtle longing, a yearning for connection amidst fleeting moments of joy. Shadow, your words echo the ephemeral nature of wonder, leaving me to ponder the mysteries of existence and the eternal dance of life and imagination. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 4/18/2024 1:13:00 PM
I am glad you got the deeper of this write Daniel tend to believe unicorns do exit in some realm that is hidden from our eyesight hugs Shadow
Date: 4/16/2024 2:02:00 AM
As usual I love reading your poems!
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Date: 4/16/2024 4:51:00 AM
Hi Arthur nice to see you. Hope you are keeping well ty for kind comments on my work hugs Shadow
Date: 4/15/2024 9:54:00 PM
An enjoyable read Shadow with an air of mystery. Hope you're feeling better now. Greetings from Crete. Tom
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Date: 4/16/2024 4:47:00 AM
Ty Tom hope you are enjoying Crete yes much better now ty glad you enjoyed my scribble hugs Shadow
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