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Dark Night Dawn

DARK NIGHT’s DAWN Recital of suffered wrongs will not repeal the sickness of the spirit’s darkened night But confession of cause may heal and reveal the dew upon the rose in morning light.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/27/2019 11:46:00 AM
I was impressed by the poem, Geoff, and even more so by the prologue--yes, we all constantly generate karma, good or bad, though it may not always be clear. Congrats on your win [ though I would have ranked it 1st.]
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 2/27/2019 1:16:00 PM
Your response and appreciation is of great value to me, Len. Thank you very much.
Date: 2/25/2019 8:26:00 PM
Such wise, emotional thoughts offered in your lovely Rhyme, Geoffrey. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 2/27/2019 1:14:00 PM
Many thanks for your comments and congratulations, Sandra.
Date: 2/25/2019 3:34:00 PM
Brilliant, Geoffrey. Love it. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 2/25/2019 3:59:00 PM
Thank you very much, Line
Date: 2/24/2019 3:48:00 PM
Oh I can relate big time as my sister is an expert on blaming others for what has gone wrong in her life, time to wise up and accept responsibilities which is difficult to do:-) hugs jan xx
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 2/25/2019 4:01:00 PM
Difficult but rewarding. Thank you for your feedback, Jan
Date: 2/24/2019 2:05:00 PM
deep and meaningful. A well deserved win, Geoffrey. Congrats.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 2/24/2019 4:05:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words, Andrea.
Date: 2/24/2019 1:56:00 PM
The fullness of every line makes this feel like a much bigger poem; potent. Congratulations on your win Geoffrey, xomo!
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 2/24/2019 4:04:00 PM
Many thanks, Maureen
Date: 11/17/2018 12:06:00 PM
Geoffrey, It appears that you have learned through introspection and grown to know yourself with this marvelous expression so eloquently composed as to give pause to others who have lamented similar reason. I simply loved this concise peek into your spirit! : )
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 11/18/2018 2:47:00 AM
Many thanks for your gracious comments, Connie. One benefit of living long is the chance to learn from our mistakes.
Date: 11/15/2018 2:07:00 PM
So illuminating and inspiring, this is simply beautiful-
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 11/18/2018 2:36:00 AM
Michelle, thank you for your kind response

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