Kim Rodrigues Poet Limerick

Dark Night At Freedom Bay

DARK NIGHT AT FREEDOM BAY

By the shore a spotlight searches the sea.
Those treacherous rocks wouldn't let you be.
You head toward the jagged knife.
One inch more you’d lose your life.
I say goodnight, turn out the light…I’m free.

6/30/2017
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Daniel Turner July 2, 2017 at 11:45 AM Sounds to me like "Last Night at Freedom Bay:) Sleeping near the rocks would be most treacherous, Mrs Kim:) Cool limerick! Kim Rodrigues July 2, 2017 at 12:16 PM Thank you, Daniel!