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Dark Night At Freedom Bay

DARK NIGHT AT FREEDOM BAY By the shore a spotlight searches the sea. Those treacherous rocks wouldn't let you be. You head toward the jagged knife. One inch more you’d lose your life. I say goodnight, turn out the light…I’m free. 6/30/2017 Limerick Form

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Date: 7/2/2017 11:45:00 AM
Sounds to me like "Last Night at Freedom Bay:) Sleeping near the rocks would be most treacherous, Mrs Kim:) Cool limerick!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2017 12:16:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel!

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