Dark Night

Toward a twilight I walk in search of a light, Not recognizing Ahead of that destiny There is also a dark night.

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Date: 10/25/2012 11:18:00 AM

Creative and unique work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on your win..Sara

Date: 10/24/2012 3:32:00 PM

a DEEP one with the imagery. very nice. and congrats for the HM.

Date: 10/24/2012 3:26:00 PM

Contest results .... you won, congratulations. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Date: 10/24/2012 6:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest Goran. Love, Carol

Date: 10/24/2012 3:19:00 AM

CONGRATS GORAN ON WINNING AN HM FOR THIS WONDERFUL WRITE LUV ..

Date: 10/23/2012 6:53:00 PM

GORAN, CONGRATULATIONS !!! :-) enjoyed your wonderful poem in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest... take care~xox~PD

Date: 10/13/2012 4:52:00 PM

A lovely poem Goran. - Wishing you a beautiful weekend! - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Date: 10/12/2012 9:31:00 AM

Lovely Tanka Goran! Light and darkness seem to go hand in hand. For where there is light, the shadow follows. Nice!