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Dark Matter, Mostly Everything

You look, yet you cannot see The learned tell you I am there, In the vastness of the firmament I am omnipresent, I am everywhere, The universe, I coalesce For without me, it falls apart, I am mostly everything, Yet I exist, in the dark. Entry for The Miniverse Poetry Contest Sponsored by Nina Parmenter. 15/7/2019

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Date: 7/21/2019 12:03:00 PM
Brilliant. And what Nina said, perfectly constructed poem, a joy to read. Congrats on your win! xomo
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/21/2019 12:31:00 PM
Thank you Maureen. :)
Date: 7/20/2019 9:55:00 AM
Clever Gary. Congratulations on your placement!
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/20/2019 12:15:00 PM
Thank you Jeanne. :)
Date: 7/20/2019 8:23:00 AM
Gary, CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win. Janice
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/20/2019 8:24:00 AM
Thank you Janice. :)
Date: 7/20/2019 6:26:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Gary. Well done.
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/20/2019 6:31:00 AM
Thank you Line. :)
Date: 7/15/2019 7:23:00 AM
Very creative one...I like it...
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/15/2019 7:53:00 AM
Thank you Arturo. :)

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