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Dark Matter Aka Space

There is this free ranging 
substance filling the whole 
universe,
It was called void but now 
they named it Dark Matter,
It is an infinite ocean that 
floats countless 
galaxies,             
You could called it as 
blackest shroud,
Or sometimes be known as 
darkest cloud,
It classification and 
composition is still unknown!! 
And scientists are still puzzle 
by it's origin,      
 You could call it an element 
that is neither living nor dead,
Do not brush lightly of this 
amazing thing,
It has godlike power to hold 
galaxies and invisible black 
holes!!!               And only 
recently are these scientists 
trying to replicate it in 
laboratories,
While Astronomers around 
the world looked through 
their telescopes in their 
observatories,    With an 
acknowledgement of one of 
God's greatest mysteries!
Refered to as DARK MATTER,
Used to be called Space.


Sheri Fresonke Harper
Personifying Science contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/23/2013 8:54:00 PM
Danesh, interesting Personifying Science poem.... congrats on the win..... Love Skat <3
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:45:00 PM
Danesh, . CONGRATULATIONS... always & forever~ LINDA
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Date: 10/18/2013 5:14:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Danesh
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Date: 10/17/2013 10:37:00 PM
Thanks much for entering my contest. This is an excellent poem about a topic of interest to science but I don't think it personifies science and that is what I'm looking for to pick the best. It could use one more edit. Also the requirements say only form is personification and you picked unknown. I really enjoyed your work, good poetry is good poetry whether it passes contest requirements.
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Date: 9/16/2013 4:55:00 AM
enjoyed the sense of wonderment and mystery of this space,danesh... poetically expressed!...:) huggs
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 9/16/2013 7:02:00 AM
humble thanks nette
Date: 9/15/2013 7:02:00 AM
nicely penned
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 9/16/2013 6:59:00 AM
thanks Joseph

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