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Dark Matter Aka Space

There is this free ranging substance filling the whole universe, It was called void but now they named it Dark Matter, It is an infinite ocean that floats countless galaxies, You could called it as blackest shroud, Or sometimes be known as darkest cloud, It classification and composition is still unknown!! And scientists are still puzzle by it's origin, You could call it an element that is neither living nor dead, Do not brush lightly of this amazing thing, It has godlike power to hold galaxies and invisible black holes!!! And only recently are these scientists trying to replicate it in laboratories, While Astronomers around the world looked through their telescopes in their observatories, With an acknowledgement of one of God's greatest mysteries! Refered to as DARK MATTER, Used to be called Space. Sheri Fresonke Harper Personifying Science contest

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Date: 10/23/2013 8:54:00 PM
Danesh, interesting Personifying Science poem.... congrats on the win..... Love Skat <3
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:45:00 PM
Danesh, . CONGRATULATIONS... always & forever~ LINDA
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Date: 10/18/2013 5:14:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Danesh
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Date: 10/17/2013 10:37:00 PM
Thanks much for entering my contest. This is an excellent poem about a topic of interest to science but I don't think it personifies science and that is what I'm looking for to pick the best. It could use one more edit. Also the requirements say only form is personification and you picked unknown. I really enjoyed your work, good poetry is good poetry whether it passes contest requirements.
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Date: 9/16/2013 4:55:00 AM
enjoyed the sense of wonderment and mystery of this space,danesh... poetically expressed!...:) huggs
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 9/16/2013 7:02:00 AM
humble thanks nette
Date: 9/15/2013 7:02:00 AM
nicely penned
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 9/16/2013 6:59:00 AM
thanks Joseph

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