Dark Haiku

Listen to the sounds--
Eerie, spectral, strange, haunting:
These are cursèd grounds.

Reeking, nauseous smell
Reaching to your very soul--
From the pit of hell.

Darkness and shadows
Fly on the cavernous walls
Like a million crows.

Teeth as black as coal,
Bloodshot eyes and twisted horns--
Satan’s crafty troll.

Flames that leap up high
Damned souls scream in piercing cries:
No respite is nigh.

Serpents intertwine
Around Satan’s very throne
Where demons recline.

Pitch black and blood red
Dominate the ghastly scene:
Where the Devil led.

March 26, 2023

3rd Place
Hell Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori
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Alex Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 8:34 PM
Great and beautiful picture of hell. Congratulations!
Gayagay Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 12:26 AM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Agustin Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 8:11 PM
Congrats, Kabayan! Thanks for sharing your "dark haiku" poetically. God bless you.
Gayagay Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 9:24 PM
Thank you, Kabayan. Thanks so much for the kind words and encouragement.
Fowler Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 7:34 PM
Very visual Ryan. Congratulations on your win! :)
Gayagay Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 9:26 PM
Thank you all for the kind words.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 6:57 PM
Dark indeed! Congratulations on your third place win!
Gayagay Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 9:27 PM
Thank you very much.
Daniel Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 8:21 AM
These are brilliant, Ryan, should place high:)
Gayagay Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 5:07 PM
Thank you, Joanna. You're so kind.
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