Dark Gooey Puddle

Are you feeling befuddled, 
or slightly bemuddled?
Does it feel like you’re standing in a dark gooey puddle?
Leap out of that hole, 
and fling off your boots!
Climb up that tree, 
and gobble down fruits.
I see you there smiling, 
perched way up high, 
free as a bird, 
bright sun in the sky.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 1, 2012 at 9:23 PM
Enjoyed your poem very much and congrats..Patrick
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