Dark Dreams

sounds of loneliness
launch echoes bounced off shadows
through dark tunnels of my dreams
in the distance a light
and its promises of morning     



AP: 1st place 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Brewer Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 3:36 PM
Impressive in its beautiful simplicity, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 8:28 PM
Thank you, Geoffrey. Much appreciated.
Krutsinger Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 6:26 AM
Such a gorgeous write, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 10:08 AM
Thank you so much, Caren.
Kiser Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 6:32 PM
Ooh, beautifully done, good luck in the contest.
Gauthier Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 8:05 PM
Thanks, ML. Much appreciated.
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