Debbie Guzzi Poet Rhyme

Dark Descends

Onyx cloak
of sunny day's baroque
lay velvet on the breast of each day,

gently caress each curvaceous earthly display 
with night tones of diamond stars, a queen's array.

Diamonds of champagne sing amends
to onyx night.. as friends
dark descends.


Date: 8/22/12
Poet:Debbie Guzzi
Contest: NIGHT MELODY---TROIS-par-HUIT

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Poet Destroyer A September 1, 2012 at 11:01 AM Debbie, Congratulations, with your awesome entry in Nette's NIGHT MELODY---TROIS-par-par par-what a HUIT :-) :-) contest... I love your entry... always~ PD

Carol Sunshine Brown August 30, 2012 at 10:25 AM Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Night Melody" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich August 28, 2012 at 7:52 PM gosh, this one could do double duty in the Black Diamond night contest as well. I am reading some really great top poems on this winner list. Congrats, Debs.

Kash Poet August 28, 2012 at 2:01 PM Enjoyed this very much Debi!Congrats on the win!

Joann Grisetti August 28, 2012 at 9:19 AM Congratulations on your win with this poem.

Modupe Sefunmi August 28, 2012 at 7:25 AM Congrats on your win!

Nette Onclaud August 28, 2012 at 6:33 AM really quietly powerful, debbie.. congrats on your well-deserved win in my contest!..:) huggs!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 28, 2012 at 6:12 AM Congratulations Debbie, very descriptive xx

Lee Ramage August 28, 2012 at 5:57 AM Debbie, well done. I enjoyed this poem, your descriptions are beautiful. Lee

Lucilla Carrillo August 24, 2012 at 9:31 PM I like this very much. You have some imagination. Good luck in contest. Lucilla

James Fraser August 24, 2012 at 5:55 PM Delightful dark read Debbie, creative seduction of the night, mmm :) Thralls my inner soul this Saturday morning in Bonnie Scotland. Have a lovely weekend :) xx

Bl Devnath August 24, 2012 at 11:41 AM Lovely poem dark descends. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

Kash Poet August 22, 2012 at 7:14 PM Wonderful imagery you have created here Debi....soupmail.

Joann Grisetti August 22, 2012 at 5:56 PM Well done for a new form. I love your word play and the images you conjure. Is the title supposed to be from the last line? I think I forgot that.

Andrea Dietrich August 22, 2012 at 5:53 PM hmmm, I just saw her remark to you as I went off. Did you not do it right?I need to start reading and seeing what she wants!!

Andrea Dietrich August 22, 2012 at 5:52 PM Debs, this is exactly what Nette wants. I predict an awesome diamond win!!

Nette Onclaud August 22, 2012 at 11:44 AM debbie, my example for this form was included on the contest page... hmm, i wonder if TPS has some magical spells, lol.. hope i caught your drift!...:) huggs!