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Dark Descends

Onyx cloak of sunny day's baroque lay velvet on the breast of each day, gently caress each curvaceous earthly display with night tones of diamond stars, a queen's array. Diamonds of champagne sing amends to onyx night.. as friends dark descends. Date: 8/22/12 Poet:Debbie Guzzi Contest: NIGHT MELODY---TROIS-par-HUIT

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Date: 9/1/2012 11:01:00 AM
Debbie, Congratulations, with your awesome entry in Nette's NIGHT MELODY---TROIS-par-par par-what a HUIT :-) :-) contest... I love your entry... always~ PD
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Date: 8/30/2012 10:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Night Melody" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/28/2012 7:52:00 PM
gosh, this one could do double duty in the Black Diamond night contest as well. I am reading some really great top poems on this winner list. Congrats, Debs.
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Date: 8/28/2012 2:01:00 PM
Enjoyed this very much Debi!Congrats on the win!
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Date: 8/28/2012 9:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this poem.
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Date: 8/28/2012 7:25:00 AM
Congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/28/2012 6:33:00 AM
really quietly powerful, debbie.. congrats on your well-deserved win in my contest!..:) huggs!
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Date: 8/28/2012 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations Debbie, very descriptive xx
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Date: 8/28/2012 5:57:00 AM
Debbie, well done. I enjoyed this poem, your descriptions are beautiful. Lee
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Date: 8/24/2012 9:31:00 PM
I like this very much. You have some imagination. Good luck in contest. Lucilla
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Date: 8/24/2012 5:55:00 PM
Delightful dark read Debbie, creative seduction of the night, mmm :) Thralls my inner soul this Saturday morning in Bonnie Scotland. Have a lovely weekend :) xx
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Date: 8/24/2012 11:41:00 AM
Lovely poem dark descends. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 8/22/2012 7:14:00 PM
Wonderful imagery you have created here Debi....soupmail.
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Date: 8/22/2012 5:56:00 PM
Well done for a new form. I love your word play and the images you conjure. Is the title supposed to be from the last line? I think I forgot that.
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Date: 8/22/2012 5:53:00 PM
hmmm, I just saw her remark to you as I went off. Did you not do it right?I need to start reading and seeing what she wants!!
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Date: 8/22/2012 5:52:00 PM
Debs, this is exactly what Nette wants. I predict an awesome diamond win!!
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Date: 8/22/2012 11:44:00 AM
debbie, my example for this form was included on the contest page... hmm, i wonder if TPS has some magical spells, lol.. hope i caught your drift!...:) huggs!
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